Tuesday 12 July 2016

Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series: Appendix

                                                             APPENDIX B

When Lin Carter and the Adult Fantasy Series signed off, Carter did not sit still. And so I have one last fantasy series to bring to your attention before I, too, sign off. This next series lasted for 6 volumes, and though I have read them they will not be reviewed here, but should be of interest to collectors of the main series. I will merely display the cover art and the table of contents. I was fortunate to find the entire collection all at once in one used book store. Maybe you, too, will get lucky and find this wonderful series...














The series continued, but with a different editor. Lin Carter kept busy until his death in 1988. Because of him and Ballantine, fantasy readership has grown into a huge market, with no signs of ever dying out.  I can particularly recommend the short stories by Pat McIntosh.

Though I am signing off of this website, I may return someday with a further appendix, discussing the fourth Titus book (written by Peake's wife, based on his sketches), and a word or two about The Silmarillion. My main task has ended, however. As a teen I came under the influence of the Ballantine series, and as I grew, aged, married, worked, lived and travelled, the series always stayed with me. Each visit to a used book store would see me searching for the unicorn symbol, slowly adding to my collection. It wasn't until I retired from teaching school music that I finally had the time to read the entire series, and to complete my collection. It has been a nearly five-year reading journey! I hope the website has introduced readers to some of the marvellous and timeless fantasy books that are still available in used book stores, as most titles are long out of print. I will continue to read fantasy (and many other genres, including science fiction) all my life, and have Tolkien, Peake, Eddison and Lin Carter to thank, among others. So long, and thanks for all the fantasy!

Mike, April 6th, 2015
 
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Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series: Vol. 61-65 (66,67)

#61--Published September 1973
High Deryni
Katherine Kurt
                                                      Cover art by Alan Mardon

I first read the Deryni trilogy when each book first came out. For those of you who like doing math, I was twenty when I first read "High Deryni." I was into trilogies at the time, as was nearly everyone who read. Never did I feel more let down by an ending than I did in this series. The book held little interest for me at that time. There was far too much talking and petty politics, with nearly zero action scenes. All the way through the book we are led to believe there will be a climactic battle scene, possibly even two. Then the first battle is eliminated when the heroes sneak into the castle through a secret passageway (yawn), capture the enemy leaders and win them over to their side. Oh well, there is always the really big, final battle to look forward to. Then that one got cancelled. Instead, we will have four leaders from each opposing army have a battle to the death using magic. Harry Potter fans might be thrilled, but I remember feeling very let down again. Then came the magic showdown. That got cancelled, too. What the hell? The third book ended with a sputter, and I remember cursing the author's name and swearing never to read another of her books again.

Then along comes maturity, plus the fact that I am rereading all of the Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series, including many of them for the first time. So that means I have to reread the three Kurtz novels. Deryni Rising, the first of the trilogy and #19 in the series, received four stars from me. Deryni Checkmate, the second novel and #46 in the Ballantine series, was nearly as good, and received three and a half stars. Now we come to the third novel, the one I quite disliked as a young man. What do I think of it today? Drum roll, please.......! I think I dislike it more now than I did then. It is a huge disappointment. Lin Carter was stuck with a stinker, and I really wonder if he would have published any more Kurtz Deryni books had the series continued. Someone did. She has now published eighteen of them. I doubt I will ever read any of them, unless someone reading this review recommends one to me especially highly.

Kurtz loves to write. Her novel is filled with details. I find most of them uninteresting and often ill placed. To give only one example (though a crushing one, I admit), as she leads up to the big magic battle (after cancelling the two actual real battles, with armies) the author stops everything dead in its tracks to go through step by step how to set up a transfer portal. Now this may be critical information for the reader or not, but this is not the place to insert several pages of candle lighting and placement of ritual objects. One might put up with it if expecting a major magic battle, but as mentioned that battle never comes. I find that her Biblical quotations that begin each chapter rather tiring, too. And can anyone still believe that Kelson is fourteen or fifteen years old? Have you ever met a boy of that age? Filled with wisdom? I didn't think so.

There are some lovely moments in the book, such as the meetings between Morgan and Richenda, but not enough of them. In short, there is too much talking, planning, describing and overall detailing, and virtually no action to speak of. I cannot recommend this book, though if you read the first two you will probably read it anyway. 
 **stars. Reviewed Oct. 9th/2014

#62--Published October 1973
Hrolf Kraki's Saga
Poul Anderson
                                                     Cover art by Allan Mardon

Anything that Poul Anderson writes is worth reading, and probably should be reread. He is renowned as a science fiction author, but his work in fantasy is much less well known. Thanks to Lin Carter and the Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series, we have two of the finest Norse mythology fantasies one could ever hope for. My earlier review of "The Broken Sword" (#24, above) spoke highly not only of the incredible story being told, but at how good the storyteller was in putting us there and making us believe what was happening. One of Carter's main ambitions with some of the older fantasy works (Orlando Furioso, for one) was to find someone who could tell, in clear, refined prose, a tale that would capture the reader from the beginning and hold his interest until the final page. 

The current saga, as told by Lin Carter in the opening essay, only survives in fragments. Anderson spent years patching it altogether and putting it into story form. The history of prehistoric Denmark (I know that sounds odd) has found a hero in Anderson, who tells us a complete saga in eight parts, leaving us dumbfounded at both the quality of these heroic tales, which were told and retold throughout the centuries, and at their ability to reach us so directly many centuries later. I cannot overstate the brilliance shown here, and urge anyone who has not come across the Sagas to read both Anderson novels in this series. Follow that up with H. Rider Haggard's "Eric Bright Eyes," and, if you can find it, E.R. Eddison's version of one of the Sagas (It's now available; I have read it and it is really really fantastic)). 

Despite being situated in Denmark, the tales are universal in their appeal. Forgot Conan the Barbarian. Meet some of the heroes here, including none less than Beowolf, and the original Beorn and his son. This is the kind of book that as soon as it is finished, the reader is ready to begin it again. It is not difficult to see why these stories would have been retold many times in olden days over one's lifetime--it would have been by request and popular demand. They are adventurous, original, heartbreaking, and unforgettable. This volume, along with "The Broken Sword," are among the finest books in the series. No wonder Tolkien, Eddison and others looked to them for inspiration for their own masterworks.
**** stars. Reviewed Nov. 14th., 2014 


#63--Published November 1973
The People of the Mist
H. Rider Haggard
                                                          Cover art by Dean Ellis

I have read almost all of Haggard's books, so you could call me a fan. However, I read most of them in my youth, enjoying his fantasy tales set in Egypt, Africa, Mexico and Iceland, among others. I had never come across the two volumes in the Adult Fantasy Series (see also #40). I had high hopes for this one. I was ready for a good boyhood adventure tale. Since it was written by an Englishman in the 1880s, I expected a good deal of racism and sexism, and indeed found some. However, the book is remarkably modern in tone and mostly free of gratuitous examples of them. I knew things could not be all bad when the main characters were a white male, a white female, a black dwarf, and a quasi-lesbian. The "n" word does appear once or twice early on, but it is only used by slavers, the bad guys of the story. The bad guys in the lost city are not black and white characters, either. They are complicated people and driven by customs and motives that are astonishing in this type of novel.

It all begins well, with a lengthy pre-story. We start out in England, then are soon swept into Africa, seven years later. The reader gets involved with the rescue of a white girl captured by slavers, as well as a number of natives who were also taken. This part of the story is filled with excitement and marvellous story telling, and if Haggard had only wrote this as his main tale it would have been a corker. This man can write adventure stories like no one else. Period. One of the most impressive things about Haggard is his use of logic when writing. Any time that a reader thinks he has found a flaw in the storyline, or thinks that Haggard has forgotten about something important, it always gets dealt with properly and logically. He is a true master, and there are no loose ends.

His descriptions of slavery and slavers, and how people were treated once they were captured, will be one of the most brutal things you will ever read. There is no gratuitous violence. A short paragraph with barebones description suffices for Haggard. Once the slavery story has been told, we are one third into the volume. Now it is time to look for the undiscovered People of the Mist. If the accurate cover illustration appeals to you (as it does me), then you wish to get there in a hurry. Slow down; it takes a while to get there. It's a long walk. However, once we are in the hidden city Haggard really begins to show us his stuff as a writer. There was a point when I was convinced that the best part of the story was already over (slavers), but it soon kicked into high gear once again, and I found myself reading far beyond my allotted two chapters per day. The lost city story begins slowly, but gains momentum and literally flies along after a while. No wonder I loved this stuff as a youngster! And I am happy to say I still love it. It is pure escapism, like the old Saturday afteroon serials at the bijou. But it is the most well-written escapism you will ever come across. It is no surprise that many, many movies have been made from stories by Haggard.

Reading it you may think "Oh, I've read stories like this before." You probably have. And guess who started them all, and is still better than everyone else who followed? Edgar Rice Burroughs wrote dozens of them, after going gaga over Haggard. If you enjoy this book, then dive into his King Solomon's Mines series, as well as the Ayesha Egyptian series. His Aztec story and Icelandic one are also top knotch.
**** stars. Reviewed December 10th/2014
 

#64--Published February 1974
Kai Lung Unrolls His Mat
Ernest Bramah
                                                              Cover art by Ian Millar

This novel, and the one by Haggard that comes just before it, is a perfect illustration of why the Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series was so great. Two novels of such different approaches to fantasy cannot be found anywhere else. Whereas the Haggard tale is a blustery and straight forward adventure tale that would have a wide appeal to many fantasy readers, the Bramah novel is much more restrained, and doubtless would have far less appeal. Several of the series entries are fantasies that seem like they would appeal to a very narrow, highly discriminating readership. No doubt sales of such books would reflect this fact. However, Lin Carter continued until the very end to give us fantasy stories that we could find nowhere else. No such series could ever succeed in today's market, and it barely hung on back in the golden years for fantasy during the Sixties and Seventies.

It would be a shame to miss out on this volume because the printing is very small and the language peculiar to Bramah and his Orientalist tales. I read this one slowly (as I do most books in the series), lingering over many exquisite phrases and readily enjoying the sly, subtle humour each tale contains. There are ten tales contained within one connecting storyline, much in the way of The Arabian Nights. However, the connecting story is quite well developed, and just as fun and intriguing as any of the inner tales. When he encounters a person of interest who might help him on his journey, Kai Lung unrolls his mat, sits and begins a story. This is how he pays his way along the road. We walk along with Kai Lung as he goes in search of a kidnapped wife, taken by an arch-enemy from the previous book (see #45, above). I cannot single out any particular story for extra praise, as they are all top-notch. If you do not wish to read the whole book, however, you might try the tale on P. 75, "The Tale of Tong So, The Averter of Calamities." A 20 page story in four chapters, it is easy to read and will give a very good idea of Bramah's genius. I can imagine Fritz Leiber reading this one and being completely delighted, as there is a Lankmarian flavour to it. If you enjoy this tale, I suggest going back to the beginning and reading the entire book. This is one of my favourite volumes in the entire series.
**** stars. Reviewed January 6th/15 
       Note: Beginning on page 181, my copy of the book has the printing crammed into the inside margin for quite a few pages. While annoying, it is still possible to read. This is the first time I have run into this problem, as least as far as I can remember.

Only one more novel remains in the main published Ballantine series. However, I will review two more volumes afterwards that were next in line to be published, and eventually were when Del Rey and Ballantine published them without the unicorn symbol. After these two, I have one more related Lin Carter fantasy series to tell readers about, so I won't be going away soon. Once the Ballantine series was cancelled, he began a new series publishing short fantasy stories. I shall briefly discuss those books, too. 


#65--Published April 1974
Over the Hills and Far Away
Lord Dunsany
                                                 Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

We have come at last to the final published volume of the Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series. Knowing how popular fantasy is these days, it is a shame that the series did not carry on indefinitely. At least there should be a revival of the basic idea by some publisher. Enough with the teen vampire books, please. The next two books in the series were all lined up and waiting to be published, and they were; just not under the sign of the unicorn. So at least two more reviews will follow this one. After that, we will see where things take us.

At least the series ended very strongly. The collection of short stories and plays contained within this volume are magnificent! Lin Carter has divided it into four main sections, and I will review the book by section. I read only two or three of these stories at each sitting. Like a box of fine chocolates, you could devour the whole thing at one go if you wished. It depends on your particular style of eating. I prefer a few at a time...

Section 1 is called "Tales of the World's Edge." Carter titled this book himself, as well as the individual sections.
"The Journey of the King." The first story, at 35 or so pages, is the longest in the volume. A king summons several mystics and philosophers, posing a question to each one of them. What happens to me when I die? The answers that come forth are fantasy writing as its best. If you still think that the Bible is great literature, wait until you try this stuff. I loved every one of the replies, but they get better and better as they go along. A gem of a tale!
"The Fall of Babbulkund." This story was also published in New Worlds For Old, #35 in the series. It is essentially a description of a vast city that must be seen to be believed, and some travellers tell their tale of voyaging there in order to see it for themselves. They encounter other travellers and hear of its greatness. Unfortunately, they never get to see it. This is a story to read slowly, and should be an inspiration to calendar artists everywhere.
"The Bird of the Difficult Eye." This tale of a jewel thief will delight fans of Fritz Leiber and Lankmar.
"The Secret of the Sea." This story also has a Lankmarian bent. We almost learn one of the greatest secrets ever.
"The Compromise of the King of the Golden Isles:" A very short play, telling the tale of a mere king who dared to defy the Emperor. This would be fun to stage at a fantasy con.

Section 2 is called "Tales of Far Away."
"The House of the Sphinx." Something wicked this way comes, and it's coming for the Sphinx. I love how the author leaves undescribed what actually happened at the end. The world is full of mystery.
"Blagdaross," though it has a happy ending, is one of the saddest stories I have ever read. Have you ever felt any emotion for a discarded cork, an old broken kettle, or a piece of worn rope? This story is a 4 1/2 page wonder, showing that Dunsany's imagination is nearly limitless.
"The Lonely Idol." What happens when all those gods who were once worshipped are abandoned? Some of them don't seem to lose their influence, at any rate. One page in length. This story could be a metaphor for people who still discover and read the Ballantine Adult Fantasy series.
"An Archive of the Older Mysteries." Another one-page story detailing the creation and existence of a jade figure.
"The Loot of Loma" is a story of Native Americans who dare to loot and destroy a city rooted in old gods. Another great ending, where we have no real idea of what happened to the looters. We have strong hints, however.
"The Last Dream of Bwana Kubla", in which London materializes in a most unusual location.
"The Queen's Enemies" is the second short play featured. It is even better than the first one. It tells of how much the Queen hates to have enemies. She invites them to a banquet, and despite their wariness they are unable to outwit her.
"How Plash-Goo Came to the Land of None's Desire". How did Plash-Goo get there? Unexpectedly.
"The Prayer of Boob Aheera." He who prays first prays best.
"East and West," in which an unusual carriage race is observed by an unconcerned bystander.
"How the Gods Avenged Meoul Ki Ning." Otherwise known as how the gods almost avenged Meoul Ki Ning.
"The Man With the Golden Ear-Rings." This short fragment is concerned with the near extinction of pirates.
"Poor Old Bill." Bill is the only survivor of a cursed sea voyage. Poor old Bill.

Section 3 is called "Tales of Near at Hand."

"The Bad Old Woman in Black" is reminiscent of an Eastern European folktale. Omens come in strange forms.
"The Field." One of several London stories in this section. There is a lot of history around that city, much of it known, some of it unknown.
"Where the Tides Ebb and Flow" is as close as Dunsany comes to writing a pure horror story. Imagine this one as a short film! A dead man tries to find some peace.
"The Little City" describes a view from a train window. Only half a page long.
"The Highwayman" is another little tale of horror, as friends of the robber try to give his body a decent burial. Wonderful ending.
"In the Twilight" describes the near-death experience of a man who falls overboard in a narrowboat canal.
"The Ghosts" is yet another little horror gem, following upon a heated discussion between brothers on the existence of ghosts.
"The Doom of La Traviata" tells of several disobedient angels.
"The Narrow Escape" is the story of a magician who lives in the bowels of London, and has decided that it is time to end it all. Not his life, but London's. He needs a special ingredient to make his potion, and sends his familiar on a year-long quest. London survives, but it's unlikely if the familiar does.
"The Lord of Cities" is essentially a discussion between a road and a brook. Which is more important, the sea or cities?
"The Unhappy Body" wishes only for rest, but the soul craves so much more.
"The Gifts of the Gods" is a poor man's version of War and Peace, in under four pages.
"On the Dry Land" is a very short story involving Love, Death, a marsh and an old man. I don't wish to give away too much.
"The Unpasturable Fields", at half a page, is a short discussion between mountains and clouds.

Section 4, the final one, is called "Tales Jorkens Told," invoking a particular type of British tale told at that pillar of male society, The Club.

In Dunsany's "Curse of the Witch," what is it that is causing the hounds to howl in such fear? If you love dogs, you may not appreciate this little piece of horror.
"Hunting the Unicorn". What is the one word that casts doubt that Jorkens ever did hunt a unicorn?
"The Pale Green Image" takes us to Tunis, where a curse is still a curse, no matter who you are.
"The Sacred City of Krakovlitz" was once thought to have been destroyed. And yet it appears to live on.
"At Sunset" is a short poem used to finish the volume, and it makes a wonderful coda to all of the wonders seen within these pages. I guess if the series did have to come to an end, it could not have ended any stronger than this volume, and this little poem.
**** stars. Reviewed February 8th/15 
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APPENDIX A

#66--Published June 1974
Merlin's Ring
H. Warner Munn
                                                     Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

This book was the next one in line to be printed, but the series was cancelled. Everything about the book is exactly the same, except there is no unicorn on the cover. The intro by Lin Carter is there, and is written as if the series were still well underway. The cover is another brilliant one by Gallardo. All seems well. Except it wasn't. Mercifully the book still got published by Ballantine, and it is a fine story, too.

As much as I love the story, I find it oddly dispassionate, as if the author could spin a really good yarn, but could not quite master the art of building a lead character and making him loved by readers. Gwalchmai does all the right things, and carries out many heroic deeds, and remains faithful to one woman for hundreds of years. It's just that when all is said and done, he is not really missed much. We don't feel as attached to him as we should, especially after such a long, involved tale in which he features prominently in every act.

The volume covers much of medieval history, including happenings in Asia. Authors today would wring four or five books out of these ideas, but Munn covers it neatly in one. There are four or five different major events within the pages, linked together by Gwalchmai's pursuit of his goal, which is to give away the secret of the existence of North America to a Christian leader. While Merlin's Ring plays an important role in the proceedings, Gwalchmai, as Merlin's apprentice/messenger, plays a bigger one. Gwalchmai is the Man, though he is such a cardboard character (think of some of the lesser Hercules-type movies you have seen) that my feelings for him do not run very strong. Perhaps you will feel differently.

At any rate, this is a must-read book, one of the best stories I have ever read. It would make an epic TV series, too, involving Norsemen, early medieval times, Rome and the catacombs, Genghis Khan (the Gobi Sea interlude is a highlight), Samurai, and the 100 Years' War between England and France. The on-going love-story is potent and well written, and the character of Corenice, late of Atlantis, is beautiful and believable. Fantasy meets the real medieval times. Highly recommend reading.
**** stars. Reviewed March 4th, 2015 
   
 #67--Published November 1974
 Prince of Annwn
Evangeline Walton

  This volume not only completes our journey through Ballantine Fantasy's Golden Years of the late 60s and early 70s, but it also completes an important and stunningly written four-volume series on the Welsh tales known as The Mabinogian. Ms Walton is up to her usual brilliant storytelling tricks in Prince of Annwn, retelling the First Branch this time around. The tale is a bit less dark than the other three branches (see also Volumes 18, 33, and 51 of the Adult Fantasy Series), but is filled with both magic and humanity once again. These four books are all easy to read, and very immersive. Next in line for publication after Merlin's Ring (see above), when the series was cancelled this one nearly missed making it to light. Published under the Del Rey Fantasy logo that uses a winged griffin, Ballantine must have been pursuaded by Lin Carter to finish off the Walton series when this new branch of the publisher got rolling. There is an introduction, though not by Carter. It's a reprint from the Saturday Review by Patrick Merla, and it's quite good.

This story is divided into two main sections. "Descent into the Abyss" tells a frightening tale of underworld adventure as Prince Pwyll of Dyved is highjacked while out hunting, and convinced to do the bidding of Arawn, King in Annwn, land of the dead. This section sees the hero battle several creatures, all testing his worthiness to rule. He passes many tests, each one more demanding than the previous one, but is given some help along the way. In part two, "Rhiannon of the Birds," Pywll is returned to his people, eventually facing more tests of his strength of mind and spirit. He wins a wife, then loses her, then wins her back in a tour de force of imaginative storytelling that is both gripping and exciting. It is a difficult book to put down. 
**** stars. Reviewed March 23rd, 2015

Monday 11 July 2016

Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series: Vol. 51-60

#51--Published August 1972
The Song of Rhiannon
Evangeline Walton
                                                        Cover art by David Johnston

Easily one of the finest books in the entire series, Walton's telling of the Third Branch of the Mabinogian illustrates perfectly what superb storytelling is all about. While I prefer to read many of the epic fantasy books a chapter or two at a time, this one could easily be read in one go, and perhaps should. Continuing directly from where The Children of Llyr left off (#33, above), we follow four main characters, two men and two women, through seven years of mysterious hardship. Legend is woven upon legend, and Walton makes clear what could easily become intricate muddiness in the hands of a lesser craftsperson. The simplicity of the storytelling harkens back to my recent reread of The Odyssey, translated by Lattimore.

Not only is there great storytelling going on here, but there are ample amounts of wisdom scattered throughout the novel as well. I cannot think of any book in the main series that is more cinematic. It would make such a terrific epic in the right screenwriter and director's hands. I was unfamiliar with the Mabinogian before Walton's works came about. It is one of those confusing legends with too many characters, too many plots, and too many levels of beings. Walton takes the complicated and simplifies it to the point where things are easily understood in the first reading. As a result, the reader is able to focus on other aspects besides the plot, and reading this book is an enlightening and highly entertaining way to spend one's time. This is my favourite of the three books so far. It is lighter in tone than the second book, and has a charm that is hard to describe. Perhaps it is best expressed by the appearance of a "bogey," near the end of the book. The fourth book in the set was not published by Ballantine until after the adult series had been cancelled, but it will still be included here, at the very end. Accessible to many children above the age of ten, especially if read to. 
 **** stars. Reviewed Dec. 16th/13
 
 
 
#52--Published September 1972
Great Short Novels of Adult Fantasy 1
Ed. Lin Carter
                                                Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

There are four novellas within, not five. Sprague de Camp and Pratt co-wrote the first one. As usual, Lin Carter had a brilliant idea in publishing this book. He says in his introduction that the stories were too long for his other anthologies and too short to work on their own. Writing with considerable optimism, he hoped to make this a series within a series, by adding one volume per year of novellas. Only two were published before the great Ballantine Fantasy downfall.

Wall of Serpents, by L. Sprague de Camp and Fletcher Pratt is a fun piece to read from the first page to the last. These two authors became quite famous for their Harold O-Shea stories, and after reading this one (first time published in paperback) I want to seek them all out. The mixture of humour and magic will remind the reader of Leiber's Faffrd and Mouser stories, as well as the novels of Terry Pratchett. If you like either of those genres, you will love this story. Set in mythical Finland (in summer), there is a large cast of players, all of them indispensable and worth meeting. Pure enjoyment!
**** stars.

The Kingdom of the Dwarves, by THE Anatole France (of Nobel Prize fame), is a whimsical fairy tale that children might enjoy. It is hardly adult fantasy, despite Carter's assertion. Of course adults can enjoy it, too, and I did! It's a gentle tale, something Peter Jackson would likely turn into a bloody battle scene from beginning to end. There is some wonderful prose, and several pearls of wisdom scattered throughout. The tale is simple--dwarf king loves girl, but girl loves boy (and the nixie queen loves boy!). It is told in simple language, but never is it condescending. I'm glad I read it, and if you enjoy fairy tales, you will enjoy it, too. It would make a wonderful professional puppet presentation!
*** stars

The Maker of Moons, by Robert W. Chambers, is one of those rare stories one always hopes to come across in such anthologies! Written in 1895, it is so close to something Lovecraft would have penned that it is quite astonishing. Using ignorance among the 1895 general reading population of central China, a fantastic and devilish organization is crafted and brought to the woods of Maine, near the border with Canada. The story is amazing in concept, and executed much better than most Lovecraft stories. In all four of these mini-reviews I do not wish to give away any spoilers, nor say much except whether if it is worth your time to read them. This one is very inventive, and worth many readings.
**** stars

The Hollow Land, by William Morris, was written when he was 22. It is the shortest of the four tales, and though perhaps the least satisfying from a literary standpoint, it has all the hallmarks of a good fantasy tale. This late in the series most of Morris' major fantasy masterpieces had already been published, and combined with the fact that this is the only short fantasy tale by the author, Lin Carter was eventually going to reprint every one of his fantasy novels. I, for one, would like to have seen them all in print under the sign of the Unicorn. Only one more novel by Morris would be published. This tale is a strange one, taking us far from the beaten path. What I liked most of all, besides the jarring interplay between worlds, is how the knight never knew if his life had been devoted to God or to the devil. A very original story.
*** stars. Reviews completed Jan. 13, 2014 
 
 
 
#53--Published November 1972
Evenor
George MacDonald
                                                         Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

The title of this volume is misleading--Lin Carter took it upon himself to title it. There are actually three MacDonald novellas inside, each one being amongst the most intriguing fairy tales ever written. If you have never read MacDonald before, this is the place to begin. If this volume does not convince you that he is one of the best there is, then nothing else he ever wrote will. All of his stories, from his two fantasy novels already published in this series (Lilith, #5 and Phantastes, #14) and these shorter tales have such a freshness and crafty, sly innocence about them that they immediately remind me of the best stories from my childhood. Reading them as an adult is about as uplifting an experience as a lover of fantasy can have. Yes, the three stories in Evenor might work for some children, whose reading levels and sophistication have increased a lot since my childhood reading days. However, only an adult will have the perspective and worldliness to fully appreciate all that is going on.

The Wise Woman is totally and completely brilliant, and should be required reading of all new parents. I could not put this one down once I began. Ever wonder why the world is so messed up, and it seems to be getting worse? Why are kids shooting up schools and malls and college campuses? Could it possibly have something to do with bad parenting? Who can say. The fact is that once a child has been spoiled (and I don't necessarily mean in the traditional sense, as some are "spoiled" or "ruined" by lack of suitable attention and love as much as having too much), it is almost impossible to fix. We encounter two very different little girls in this story, one a princess who was given everything (except the moon, and she was none too pleased) and the other a shepherd' daughter. This second girl had very little physical possessions, but that did not stop her parents from spoiling her. She was overpraised for everything she did, whether praise was deserved or not. It is the unenviable job of the Wise Woman to try and turn the girls around and make them into decent human beings. Though the story is obviously dated and some of the morals belong to another time, it is amazing how timely and relevant much of the story remains. And whether you've raised little monsters or little angels (or, like most of us, someone in-between), you will be entranced by this fairy tale from the first page till the last. A highlight of the fantasy series. 
**** stars.

The Carasoyn is likewise a tale that should not be missed. The title refers to a rare wine that must be procured by the hero to rescue a young maiden from the clutches of a band of fairies. The set up to the story, where a simple shepherd's son (Colin) reroutes his local fast-moving brook through his hut, thus setting up his encounter with the fairy queen, is sheer childhood bliss. Who would not have wanted to do what Colin did with that little stream? And away he goes on an adventure that will take him many years to complete. Again it is a wise woman who comes to his aid. His time spent with a certain blacksmith and his helpers is one of the most unforgettable parts of any book I have ever read! A delight, and will be read many more times. 
**** stars.

The Golden Key, though one of MacDonald's most famous tales, is nowhere as complex or interesting as the first two stories. Encountered elsewhere on its own, it would certainly impress with its hyper-imaginative story and settings. I wish Lin carter had placed this tale first in the volume. By the time we have read the first two stories, it would take something so extraordinary to keep the pace going that I'm not certain such a story exists anywhere. But I love the Golden Key, and it does contain some of the finest prose I have ever read. It's the kind of story that might be rushed through in one go. However, some of the imagery should be allowed to linger in the mind, and some of the words, too. Perhaps it would be best read aloud as a bedtime story, not necessarily to a child. 
*** 1/2 stars. Reviewed Jan. 27th, 2014 
 

#54--Published January 1973
Orlando Furioso
Ariosto
                                                   Cover art by David Johnston

One of the real tragedies of the collapse of the Ballantine Adult Fantasy Series is that we never got more than one volume of Orlando Furioso, translated by Richard Hodgens. Judging by the length of my full copy of the original poem, at least two more volumes would have been needed. And while the poem is great fun to read, there is no comparing the brilliant translation that Lin Carter brought to us in that fateful year of 1973. This would be the last full year of publishing the series, and no further Orlando books would be forthcoming. If only...

This is one of the most original stories in all of fantasy, and though told to us by a writer who may have had attention deficit disorder, each of the many tales within a larger tale is fresh and well worth reading. Skipping about from one hero or heroine to another as frequently as he does, Ariosto does a good job of keeping things together. He may leave a particular storyline for a chapter or two, but always returns to fill us in on what has been happening to them. Reading this volume, it is easy to imagine how enraptured other writers would have been reading this, especially Tolkien and Morris. With Volume One subtitled "The Ring of Angelica," Tolkien fans should instantly sit up and take notice. Angelica's magic ring makes the person invisible who kisses it. Not only that, but the truth is revealed, whether looking at a person or a place. Illusion has no chance against the wearer of the ring.

Readers of this series may remember encountering a sample of Hodgens' translation of Orlando in an earlier volume. "Golden Cities, Far," (Vol. 22) included chapter 12, "The Palace of Illusions." As entertaining as that small selection was, reading it in context puts a rather more interesting perspective on the tale. Though some readers might be scared off by the fact that they are reading something really old, and I doubt this volume sold enough copies to warrant further volumes, to me it remains one of the highlights of the series. There are parts that are laugh out loud funny, too! Highly recommended, and certainly of little or no interest to children. 
 **** stars. Reviewed Feb. 15th/14 
 
 
 
#55--Published February 1973
The Charwoman's Shadow
Lord Dunsany
                                                          Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

The finest of the three Dunsany novels that Ballantine published in the series, it has the same dream-like prose quality that we enjoyed in Don Rodriguez: Chronicles of Shadow Valley (#30, above). Despite a smaller geographical setting, the story is expansive and wondrous, and the prose rolls off the pages like sunlight on glistening mountains. There are a number of major characters, including Ramon Alonzo and his sister Mirandola; the Magician; and the Charwoman. One might wish to add various shadows to the character list. Ever wonder what happens if a magician captures your shadow, and what he uses it for? Wonder no more, for the question is answered, in all its horror and loneliness. Recurring minor characters that add greatly to the story are the priest Father Joseph, the Duke of Shadow Valley, Peter the messenger, the mother and father of Ramon Alonzo and Mirandola, the neighbour Gulvarez (who raises good pigs), and various villagers from Aragona.

The story is simplistic and slim, telling how Ramon Alonzo sets out to magically fill Mirandola's empty dowry box. He loses his shadow to the magician as part of the bargain of being told how to manufacture gold. However, soon Mirandola tells him to forget about the gold and make up a love potion for her instead. The fun begins soon afterwards. Along with this task, he has pledged to return the old charwoman's shadow to her, so she can return safely to her home in Aragona. She also traded hers to the magician, many years earlier. It becomes apparent that the good Christian people of Aragona do not welcome people to their village who have no shadow, or even if they have a false one that refuses to change as the sun moves across the sky. A subplot concerns the marriage of Mirandola, which is woven effortlessly into the whole.

Ramon Alonzo is no special hero, but an everyday sort of fellow who would rather flirt with the village girls of Aragona than study the pedantic lessons offered by the magician. However, he is honest and true, and chivalry and family come first. Even when he does study, he thinks himself a much better student than he actually is.

Dunsany fills in this meager plot with some of the finest fantasy imagery ever written. This was one of the first books of the series I read back in the 70s (this is my original copy from 1973), and remains one of my favourites. Dunsany somehow creates poetry with his prose, something a lot of writers would be happy to do. He does not require a lot of detail to describe a place or a person, but knows just how much to offer before leaving the rest up to his reader's imagination. The magician's house is one good example of this. Also, his description of shadows and how they interact with the world has to be one of the highlights of fantasy writing. This is a beautiful adult fairy tale, child-like, sweet, and filled with wonderful characters and places. Highly recommended!
**** stars. Reviewed March 8th/14 


#56--Published March 1973
Great Short Novels of Adult Fantasy 2
Lin Carter, Ed.
                                                      Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

Once again Carter has collected a hodge podge of shorter tales, with four authors represented (see also #51). The stories vary widely in length, though the quality is fairly consistent. I really like this idea of finding suitable space for short novels, and Carter was planning more in the series. Alas, this was the final one.

The first "short novel," Woman in the Mirror, is actually lifted directly from "Phantastes" (see #14, above), Chapter Thirteen, to be precise. Carter doesn't tell us this, but merely that he likes the way MacDonald includes stories within stories in his longer writing. Assuming that not everyone had read the earlier novel, or that they might have forgotten the present story, he publishes it again. It's a good story, and I thought so the first time I read it. In fact, it was so good that I easily remembered it this time around. It concerns a special mirror (a theme we also see in "Lilith"), and he makes excellent use of the subject. Not that suitable for children. *** stars.

The Repairer of Reputations
is next, penned by Robert W. Chambers. This one reminded me just a little of "The Man Who was Thursday," though both that novel and this story turn unique corners and actually have little in common. This one is closer to Poe than Chesterton, with enough horror, especially near the end, to make one think that the fantasy element perhaps plays second fiddle. Worth a look, but certainly not of any interest to children. ** 1/2 stars.


The Transmutation of Ling, by Ernest Bramah, is one of those stories you will either love or hate. In fact, Brahma's Orientalist writing is like that--love him or leave him. Carter loves him, and so do I. I think Bramah is one of the most refreshing breezes to blow through the entire Adult Fantasy series, and I wish I had more work by this author. It's pure escapism, but with solid roots in great storytelling, exotic settings, and colourful characters. It is filled with gracious charm, unrelenting wit, and an eye for politics and their practitioners that spares no one. I don't know how else a story of this length (or this type!) would have ever been published in my lifetime, so thank you once again, Mr. Carter. *** 1/2 stars.
 
 The Lavender Dragon, by Eden Phillpotts, is the longest tale in the book, and the most difficult one to review. Though it has a loose fairy tale cloth draped over all, the story is really the author's version of a Utopia, and we are subject to quite a few long speeches about what is wrong with our world and society, and what needs to happen to make things right. Nearly every serious author makes a stab at this sort of thing in one form or another at some point in their life. Star Trek tried it out nearly every episode. The difference here is that the Utopia created by the dragon was never meant to last forever. Instead, the people within were meant to eventually leave the circle (Dragonville) and bring their new found ideals and hopes to the outside world. Still, it's another stab at promoting Communism, which, as we all know, works perfectly, right? While the politics might turn off some readers, there is no argument from me with Phillpotts as to what is wrong with society (it boils down to Greed and Creed). Will we ever get past such hurdles and move on to making life better for everyone, instead of just a few percent of society (Mapman laughs maniacally)? Anyway, by skipping over some of the dragon's longer speeches, children would enjoy hearing this tale of a very old dragon who hauls away people to his city who he thinks might fit in. Usually, they are people who did not fit in elsewhere. Though they will find the ending very sad, I found it uplifting and liberating. Is it for you? You never know. You might get hit with some ideas that have been dormant within you for some time. Or, you may fall asleep as you read. 
 *** stars.  Reviewed April 16th/14
 
 
 
#57--Published May 1973
The Sundering Flood
William Morris
                                                   Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

This is William Morris light. It is probably not a good novel to begin one's study of Morris' fantasy prose. Lin Carter knew this, and published it as the last Morris novel in the series. It is also the last fantasy work by the master, who completed it just before his death. It is filled with charm and innocence, and while there are bad people and evil deeds within, the people aren't terribly bad and the deeds not terribly evil. To readers who love the brutality and hatred that lie within the pages of "Game of Thrones," to take one example, there will be little here for you to admire and enjoy. Personally, I would reread the Sundering Flood before any of the Thrones novels. 

There are Morris haters out there, often because of the way he writes, a pseudo olde English rather than just plain English. The introductory essay by Carter deals directly and extremely well with this aspect of his writing, as does the back cover quote by L. Sprague de Camp. Those two are fans of the language used, and so am I. It takes about 4 pages to get used to, and afterwards barely gets in the way. Get over it. 

The story is simple. A young boy and girl meet one fine day. They live on opposite sides of a vast, violent river, one that is impossible to cross. At one section, the river narrows but becomes even more violent. However, the two friends can speak across it to one another, and the boy can shoot small gifts over to his friend with his bow and arrows. They grow up, become separated by war and raiders, and the story deals with the adventures each one has before they are happily reunited (yes, it's a spoiler, but this is Morris, and I said it was light). 

Tolkien was a great admirer of Morris, and it shows. Heroes in LOR seem to be lifted right from Morris. We meet a Strider-like character, as well as a mystical man, with some aspects of Bombadil, and he even has some Elvishness in him. There is magic in the book, provided by Dwarves (!), a kind witch woman, and that mystical man who appears now and again.

I would still recommend all of the Morris fantasy novels. The greatest is "Well at the World`s End", and I would recommend beginning with that double novel. However, if you are weary of the violent, lascivious and totally uncaring form of novel that passes for fantasy today, then "Sundering Flood" might provide a welcome breath of fresh air. It would make a lovely bedtime reading project for younger children (8-10) if read aloud by an adult, as I doubt they would enjoy reading it themselves because of the unusual use of language. 
*** stars. Reviewed May 20th/14 


#58--Published June 1973
Imaginary Worlds
Lin Carter
                                                           Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

This is Lin Carter's fantasy novel manifesto. Not only does he get to tell us of the origins of the modern fantasy novel, and bring us up to date (1972) on contemporary happenings, but he gets to give his opinions on most fantasy writers, historic and modern. I'm guessing this book made him a few friends and a whole lot of enemies. Who else had the guts at the time to say that Tolkien's masterpiece wasn't really so great! He pissed me off by dissing the three later books of E.R. Eddison, though there was unbounded praise for "Worm Ouroboros." And then there are the dozens of times he brings up his own writing and works. It's impossible to critique this work fairly. I wish to give him both a punch in the nose for being such an egoist, and a hand shake for a job well done.

There are eleven chapters and two appendices (and an intro). Chapter One discusses Carter's plausible theory that it was William Morris who got the ball rolling for modern fantasy writers. Chapter Two discusses Eddison, Dunsany, and Cabell. I find it amusing that his reasons for dismissing Eddison's "Mistress of Mistresses" et al are suddenly forgotten when it comes to Cabell, whose writings are even more esoteric and less action packed (yes, Carter prefers lots of action), and also that of Katherine Kurtz, whose style is so obviously influenced by mature Eddison (and both from Shakespeare). Chapter Three discusses the rise of pulp magazines and novels, with Chapter Four zeroing in on "Unknown". I liked these two chapters a lot, and highly recommend them. Next up for discussion is the Night Land, along with C.S. Lewis. Another score.

Chapter Six is spent carefully trying to convince us that Tolkien did not create such a great work after all. Can you imagine? Reasons? No religion in LOR, and very little to do with women. I agree that Tolkien had issues with female characters, though I believe he more than redeemed himself with Eowyn. She is quite possibly the finest female character in any fantasy novel, and is put through the ringer by Tolkien. And religion? To this day I thank Tolkien for finally being the person to write a great fantasy novel with NO obvious religious history, abbey ruins, or sacrificial practices in it whatsoever! It is one of the reasons I love the books so much. I always find the "creation beginnings" of fantasy works (including the bible) to be extremely boring and unnecessary. Do I sense a bit of professional jealousy in Carter for finding fault with Tolkien? Yup. Along with probably every other writer at the time. And Silmarillion had not come out yet, either, which does explain Tolkien's gods and how everything was created. I'm sure Beethoven had his detractors, too (though they are not remembered too well today).

Chapter Seven discusses Howard and those who came after. I couldn't care less for heroes (or heroines) who get everything they want through sheer muscle power. That is the most ludicrous method of making someone a hero I ever heard of, and since gunpowder was invented it hasn't worked much since. However, the discussion of Sword and Sorcery, especially where it pertains to Fritz Leiber, is a joy to read. Carter can certainly drop names, and hung out with the best of the best. Chapter Eight discusses contemporaries of Carter, writing at the time the Ballantine Series was being published. As far as it goes, this is good, too, but watch out for those career-ending opinions.

The final three chapters give us Carter's advice on writing fantasy. Much of it is very good advice, too, and he takes both good and bad examples from the literature to illustrate his talk. However, there are so many references to his own stories that it all becomes quite tedious after a while. The first appendix gives references on most of the major writers discussed, while the second one gives readers the first published list of the Adult Fantasy Series to date.

While I did enjoy the book, and would go back to a few of the chapters again someday, I was hoping for more from this one. Still, it was the only work of its kind around for a very long time, and must have had some affect on writers. Hopefully it was positive. Recommended, with reservations. ** 1/2 stars. Reviewed July 14th, 2014
 
 
 
#59--Published July 1973
Poseidonis
Clark Ashton Smith
                                                        Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

For this reviewer, Clark Ashton Smith has been the major new discovery as I work my way through the entire series. He was completely unknown to me, even when I had collected some of the earlier volumes many years ago and read them. There was no Smith in my collection until I went after the entire Ballantine series. While most of the books were located in the Detroit area (John King Books, Detroit, along with bookstores in the suburbs and Ann Arbor), I did have to resort to Amazon to complete the collection, including most of the Smith volumes. Smith did not write novels, only short stories. In a few instances his stories are linked by theme, but in many cases they are simply one-offs written mainly for the pulp magazines in the 40s.

Poseidonis (Atlantis) is a mini-theme employed by Smith in six short stories. They constitute perhaps the finest tales in this volume, and one can only lament that more were not written. At one point in his life Smith suddenly stopped writing. Perhaps he experienced an other-worldly event that made him leave his macabre worlds behind him forever. With his fomenting and fervent imagination, he certainly had more stories he could have told.

The Muse of Atlantis is the author's introduction to his theme, and it is less than a page.
The Last Incantation throws us headlong into Smith's version of the lost continent, as we get to meet its greatest wizard, Malygris, on his deathbed. What is the dying wish of this powerful mage? Think Orsen Welles and "Rosebud," only in this case it wasn't only his lost youth, but his lost sweetheart, too.
In The Death of Malygris we get further proof of how great a wizard he was. Smith is at his finest in this tale of macabre revenge from the grave. Imagery from this story has staying power.
Tolometh is one of very few poems included, and tells of a once-powerful god within his temple, now sunken and forgotten.
The Double Shadow tells of a wizard's apprentice and his fate, which was written down on a scroll by the apprentice and tossed into the sea within a sealed cylinder. Pharpetron lived apart with his master for six years in secluded studies of wizardry, and this tale is of their discovery one day of a triangular disc with strange engravings, and of the master's non-stop efforts to translate the writing. This is a Smith classic, worth more than one reading.
A Voyage to Sfanomoe leads us into the realm of science fiction, as we hear of two great scientists from Atlantis and how they escaped their continent's catastrophe by building a spaceship and voyaging to Venus. Definitely weird.
A Vintage from Atlantis tells what happens when some recently discovered ancient wine is uncorked and drunk by some sailors of today.
Atlantis is a very short poem describing the watery grave of a once fabulous realm.

In Lemuria, another very short poem, opens the next section of the Ballantine volume.
An Offering to the Moon tells of two modern archeologists, with one of them having answers to questions about their current excavations that he could not possibly know by any normal means. Good, solid Smith, if predictable.
The Uncharted Isle is the story of a shipwrecked sailor who lands on an uncharted South Pacific Island, where even the stars at night are different. He discovers some strange and uncouth goings-on, barely escaping with his life. Once back in modern civilization, will anyone believe his tale of an ancient race discovered when he was delirious with fever and thirst? Like many of Smith's stories, this would have made a great Twilight Zone episode.
Lemurienne ends this section, being a poem of four lines.

The Epiphany of Death was Smith's 12th story to be written, and the only one concerning the lost city of Ptolemides. Taking a modern day scenario and combining it with ancient myths, half-legends and mysterious undertones of certain knowledge is a well-known and oft-used Smith formula that usually works well. Not one of his strongest works, this one has a Poe-like quality to it that makes it worthwhile.

Other Realms is the final section of the volume, where Lin Carter simply piles on some great, unthemed stories written by Smith that seem to relate to lost worlds. Carter had plans to publish all of Smith's work, but this turned out to be the final volume of such in the Ballantine series. 
 
In Cocaigne is a one page poem in prose form. To me it hearkens back to the Bruegel painting.
Symposium of the Gorgon is a great story that does retain an unexpected surprise at the end. Smith meets Greek mythology, and we all win.
The Venus of Azombeii tells of one man's unique lifelong connection to Africa. When his dream of visiting it is finally realized, the tragic results are only discovered after his slow and painful death when his manuscript is read by a close friend.
The Isle of Saturn was inspired by a short quote by Plutarch, given at the beginning of the poem ("In one of these islands the barbarians feign that Saturn is held prisoner by Zeus.").
The Root of Ampoi is not the first story in this collection to harken back to Edgar Rice Burroughs. With its lost world theme, eight-foot tall race of women who rule over their ordinary-sized men, and an intrepid explorer caught up amidst the politics of a strange civilization, Smith had certainly read his Burroughs.
The Invisible City returns us to the world of science fiction, as two lost and very thirsty archeologists stumble upon an alien race living undetected in the middle of the Gobi desert. Smith tinges it with characteristic horror tones. Unique and worthwhile, and suitably creepy.
Amithaine is a poem about yet another lost city, with strong hints of Dunsany in the writing style.
The Willow Landscape is a very short, effective story about a Chinese scholar forced to sell all of his beloved and valuable possessions. However, his honesty and integrity is rewarded. For once, an untimely and hideous death is avoided. Well, the hideous part, anyway.
The Shadows is a two-pager that wraps us this volume, which is packed with treasure from beginning to end. Though a few of the tales may seem "old," Smith nearly always spins a great yarn, filled with darkness and shadow. This story ends with the ultimate darkness, as a gasping sun sets over the earth for the last time.
**** stars. Reviewed August 6th/14 


#60--Published August 1973
Excalibur
Sanders Anne Laubenthal
                                                      Cover art by Gervasio Gallardo

I tried very hard to like this novel. The Adult Fantasy series is very stingy with Arthurian material (Lin Carter explains why in the essay to this volume). I was ready for an Arthurian tale, one I had never read nor heard of before collecting the entire series (note: this book I purchased is marked as once being in the library of Alan R. Losoff--are you out there, Alan?). Miss Laubenthal certainly knows her Arthurian mythos. In fact, if one is not steeped in it, reading this novel might be somewhat cumbersome. I know a heck of a lot about it myself, and I still felt left behind many times. One of the serious problems of this book is the constant and incessant name-dropping that occurs from the legends. When you read this book you should have a handy and thorough reference guide to Arthurian legend. A glossary or family tree would also have been handy.

The author tells a very beguiling tale. The sword Excalibur, along with the Holy Grail, have made it through the centuries and reside in Mobile, Alabama. Yes, you read that right. Mobile, Alabama. In the 1970s. And there are good reasons why this might have happened, all explained rather well. As I said, it is a beguiling tale. I did enjoy the earlier parts of the book, where Rhodri the archeologist and Linette first meet and begin to dig for the sword. There is considerable groundwork laid here, and the possibilities seem endless. However, the telling of the tale quickly goes off the rails. Miss Laubenthal, who only ever wrote one fantasy book, simply cannot tell a tale very well.

I could list many examples of why I think so. In general, I enjoyed reading the first few chapters. However, by the middle of the book it was a chore to keep reading. The story jumps around between no less than seven different characters, seen from their perspective, and it all becomes a bit too much. The fantasy and magic seem to come out of nowhere. From the here and now the book suddenly jumps into a land of unicorns, and more terror is thrown at the main characters than one book should ever throw. I always find it annoying in a story when the main characters (alias good guys) have to endure every conceivable kind of torture and hardship, despite having very limited constitutions, and the bad guys (in this case, girls) have more strength and power and capability than a plethora of fierce thunderstorms. Somehow the heroes endure, and somehow the bad guys lose.

What else did I find troubling? The author's sentences (and paragraphs and even chapters) can run on and on and on. One example:

"She felt the grief of Mor, the endless hate and despair; nothing was worth prizing in all creation, and nothing worth doing but spoiling the work of the Lord of Time who was blamed for that grief, no pleasure but a bitter joy in making other's too in tasting of the same cup--the Lord of Time too through them, that he too might know it." (p. 193)

That is one clumsy sentence, and there are many, many more. I mentioned unicorns a moment ago, but I did not mention moonlight. The book opens during a very rainy time, and contains one other rainy day as well. Apparently it is never cloudy at night in Mobile. The words "moon" and "moonlight," often combined with "pale" are used uncountable times in the novel, so much so that sometimes in one (long) paragraph it exceeds ten times! Enough with the moon!! We get it--it's always clear in Mobile at night and it's always a full moon!

I have yet to mention the thing I found most annoying: the use of simile. In any good story simile has its place. And Miss Laubenthal is quite good at them, and I could quote many lovely ones I wish I had written. The problem, however, is similar to the moonlight one. There are so many similies that they become a distraction. I often found myself looking for them, expecting them, and even counting how many she could crowd into a sentence. Some pages have more than a dozen, and many sentences have three. Most use the word "like," but "as if" gets in there, too. This novel might be a candidate for the Guinness Book of Records for having the most similes.

In conclusion, if I could offer one more piece of advice to writers who write about swords. They do not "shing" when coming out of a scabbard or when being returned to one. Scabbards were mostly leather, and only a very slight sliding sound is heard when the sword comes in or out. This is a fact, though sorely challenged by Hollywood movies. Ever heard of a metal scabbard? Very, very rare, and only for show. Do you know what that would do to your sword edge? Besides, do you really want your enemy to hear you draw your weapon, or return it? As a swordsman myself I can think of too many situations where it would be a great advantage (night time, perhaps) to silently draw your sword. So, on P. 227 when Excalibur is "thrust down into the scabbard with a great ringing sound..." I wonder how thorough the author's knowledge of medieval times really was.
* 1/2 stars. Reviewed August 30th/14